Wednesday, 4 September 2013

~Should we ban plastic?~Argument~



Hay Hay!
This is my 2nd argument I did on 'Should we ban plastic?'. I think i did better than the one before (sailing around the world) because I used more information to support the reason/opinion. 
What do you think? Please comment!

~Sophia :P


2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thats very good.

Unknown said...

Well done Sophia. You have achieved the success criteria for this argument. I like that you have given details to support the claims that you make. You have alternated points of view and signposted these with appropriate sentence starters. I agree with you that it's about how we use it not the fact that we have it.