Wednesday, 31 July 2013

~My Speech draft/plan~

This is the speech that I wrote...
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~Speech plan~
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Speech is about - Little brothers and sisters-things you should know about (The Good, the o-k, and the Ugly/bad )
What type of speech? - Information
Ideas - (for each paragraph)
1. The good things about brothers and sisters - you can make them do things for you.
2. The o-k things that they can do. - being annoying & believing in things that are not real.
3. the bad things and ugly things - fights and being physical. Also they (might) know your secrets/embarrassing stuff and telling their friend and humiliating you and making you mad...
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Intro :
-Hook
-explain topic and why you are choosing this topic.
Paragraph 1 : (strongest idea)
The good
Paragraph 2 : ( 2nd strongest idea)
The o-k
Paragraph 3 : (3rd strongest idea)
The bad and ugly
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P1 - The good-making them (literally) servants for you.
P2 - Things that they do that are o-k-saying dumb things like fairies or superheroes (like superman) is real. Believing dumb things.
P3 - The bad-Fights and hurting you or (with older siblings) being plain mean and bullying you.
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intro -
Sister - SISTER!!! COME PLAY BARBIE WITH ME PLEASE!!!
NO! Not now!
Sister - WHY? *Says enthusiastically* OOH DID YOU FIND FAIRIES?
I'm making a speech! Gosh can you please go away?!
Sorry about that... If you're smart enough you should know what my speech is about... Yes. Having a older or younger brother or sister. There are bad and good parts to it... So pretty much this is all about what they do.... So people if you have a brother or sister you better listen!


Paragraph 1 -
Firstly people want to know why having a brother or sister can be good...With a older brother or sister you could borrow really cool stuff from them... well it applies if you’re older sister is a girl and you’re a girl or if your older brother is a boy and you are... Personally I’m the oldest in my family and seriously my little sister keep asking for my stuff! If you’ve got a younger sister you can literally make them your servant... I’m not kidding... Just say something like... If you get me my book from my desk then you get a blah blah blah or atleast something like that... Bribe them with something they like but it can’t be expensive... make it little but nice and something they like!

Paragraph 2 -
Next we’re up to the between good and bad part, the O-K part. These are normally things that can annoy you but not as much as the bad and ugly parts...
Little sisters or brothers can find fairies, magical ponies, superheroes and like flying cars real. If they have EVER blabbed about how when they grow up they will be like barbie and save wild horses or superman and save people from a exploding building or something...
Yes. We get it! I mean seriously...! Just ignore it!
With older brothers or sisters they can find themselves like 'the boss' and has to tell you what is awesome these days or things they don't like about you.*says it poshy annoying like* *OMG! That shirt you're wearing was so last year!* or *ewww since when was lego cool?*
If it’s that IGNORE IT. Who cares? You like what you like and that makes your different right? I like horses and Taylor Swift... my little sister likes Pigs and One Direction. Differences are good!

Paragraph 3 -
*gasps* Yes! We are up to the bad and ugly parts of having a brother or a sister!
No one -believe me- likes bad things...
Fights. Those are one of the bad parts of having a brother or sister... Fights.
Normally the fights are about normal things like... who is going on the computer first or about if One Direction is better or if Taylor Swift is better... WARNING! They can get physical... What do I do though? If they or older or younger let them have their way! YES! I’m saying let them win if you're fighting about what is better... BUT when you're fighting about getting something or using something... it may come to... PARENTS! YES! THE POWER OF PARENTS! BUT-If you don’t want the power of parents share it or... be nice! JUST QUIT FIGHTING!!! Another thing is that sometimes they know your dirty or deep dark secrets that you told them or they found out... Another part of that would also be embarrassing moments! Once your brother or sister have got their hand on it they will be dying to tell someone and make you look like a fool! Look and act like if you don’t care... what they want from you is anger and humiliation! DON’T... AND I MEAN DON’T Look sad... look as if it never happened and carry on!

Conclusion -
*says sadly* Yes... This speech has come to an end...
Sister - SISTER YOU DONE YET?
PLEASE Just wait a bit longer!!!
Sister - OK!!! I’LL GO FIND A TALKING BUTTERFLY!
So guys you know how to put up with  annoying sisters and brothers.. REMEMBER Siblings are not always that bad... Just be you and be nice!
Well... CYA! I’M OFF TO PLAY BARBIE OR FIND TALKING BUTTERFLY’S WITH MY LITTLE SISTER!
*skips off*

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In the end I was in the speech finals! Even though I didn't get 1st, 2nd or 3rd I was happy that I got a chance anyway!

~Sophia :D


3 comments:

Anonymous said...

that is such a funny speech and well done on competing and getting into the speech comp!!!!KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Thanks Maddi!
:)

~Sophia

Anonymous said...

im off to find talking butterflies!
Thats so funny :)