Wednesday, 3 July 2013

~Writing Explanation~

~How rubbish can kill~


Rubbish can seem like nothing but really it does a lot... even killing.
You might be wondering...but how can rubbish kill?
Well this will explain...

So lets say someone drops a candy wrapper on the beach. The wind blows the candy wrapper into the water and it floats away.
Soon a bird comes swooping up the wrapper thinking it is a fish.
The bird eats it not knowing it is a plastic candy wrapper.
Soon as it eats more and more plastic thinking it is food, the bird gradually dies because the plastic fills up their bellies that they are not able to have space for other food.
Not only is it just birds that eat plastic it is also... Turtles, sharks and other marine life too.

Strange things end up in the animals belies... lighters, toothbrushes and way more!

We can stop this now, if we top throwing rubbish and litter everyday and we reduce, reuse and recycle we could save loads of birds from eating plastic and dying from it.
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This is my explanation writing. We had to explain the cause of how birds and marine dies from plastic and litter. I decided to do mine kind of like a story because it was easier and it still had the message I wanted to have. Mrs Paton (our student teacher) helped up with it and told us what to do step by step and it helped me. 
We had a worksheet where we had to plan what we were going to write and stuff.
I think I still need to work on writing a explanation but next time I will try to use more interesting words and make it just better.

~Sophia :P




3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I am liking the way you are explaining how our rubbish is killing marine life it's so a 10/10:)

Anonymous said...

that is really sad we should find a way to let the world know this!

Anonymous said...

Not turtles!:(